2 main agencies in the criminal
justice system
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2 main agencies in the criminal justice system
ORIGINALITY REPORT
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FINAL GRADE
36/100
2 main agencies in the criminal justice system
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
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Strengths
– You have provided a response which demonstrates
an understanding of the role and functions of the CJS
agencies
– You have consulted some academic sources
Areas for Development
– You need to ensure that you have clearly understood
what the question is asking of you – you haven’t really
answered the question sufficiently.
– Large proportions of your work focuses on the Justice
System in America, and therefore is not relevant to the
CJS in England and Wales
– You work is largely descriptive, and often doesn’t
relate to the question.
– Your work should be underpinned by a wider range of
appropriate academic sources
– There is a high similarity score, with a significant
proportion of your work showing similarity to individual
papers. In these sections, you have often failed to cite
the sources of your work, and therefore it is unclear
where you have obtained this information from
Writing and Referencing (writing clarity,
presentation, referencing, citation)
– Your work is adequately written
– Your work is adequately structured, however, this is
an area for development for you – I would encourage
you to have a clear idea of the points that you want to
make in your response so that when you start writing
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you know what the purpose of each paragraph is and
how this relates back to the question. This will help you
to be focused and concise in your response and strike
a good balance between description and analysis. This
will also support you with proof-reading as you will be
able to check whether your paragraph does what you
intended it to do.
– Scholarship is an area of development, you often do
not cite the source of your information
– You generally reference in accordance with APA
guidelines
First Marker: Julie Eden 11/11/19
***Please ensure adequate paraphrasing and
referencing , in order to avoid possible plagiarism
claims. You may find it useful to see Gordon
Scruton, Learning Development Tutor at ICJS. ***
Nick Pamment, Associate Head (Students)
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Comment 1
Please ensure that you include the full essay question that you are answering.
Format
Please ensure that you are paying attention to the format specified in the assignment brief.
Additional Comment
Sub-headings are not appropriate for academic essays
Comment 2
What does this mean?
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Structure
You would benefit from spending some more time working on structure. This Basic Essay Structure
Guide may be useful for you.
Additional Comment
A good attempt at an introduction here – well done – however, this needs to be developed further; an
introduction needs to define and explain keywords, phrases or themes and sign-post the reader to
the main points that will be explored in the main body.
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Additional Comment
I’m not sure what you mean here?
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What do you mean?
Comment 3
You demonstrate some understanding of the agencies of the criminal justice system and their roles.
However, you have not consistently cited your sources of information here, and this is very
descriptive.
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Comment 4
You demonstrate some understanding of the role and function of the police force. However, you have
only made one citation, and this is largely descriptive. How does what you have written relate to the
question?
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Comment 5
There are a lot of references in this paragraph to the American legal system. I can see from the
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There are a lot of references in this paragraph to the American legal system. I can see from the
similarity checker that this paragraph has a high similarity to a paper submitted to the University of
Colorado – I’m not sure where you have obtained this information as you have not cited your sources,
but it is important to do so, so that we can support you in making sure that you are accessing suitable
resources.
Again, this is very descriptive and it is not clear how what you have written relates to the question.
Comment 6
This does not relate to the CJS in England and Wales.
Structure
You would benefit from spending some more time working on structure. This Basic Essay Structure
Guide may be useful for you.
Additional Comment
An adequate attempt at a conclusion here, but this is an area of development for you; a conclusion
must summarise the main points that you have made in the main body, and then draw to a
conclusion on your own positionality.
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