this is my feedback
(Your draft is a good start, but my main issues are the use of inappropriate references, such as drugbank, chemicalbook, ‘prednisolone’. There seems to be an over-reliance on websites for chemical data – please use an appropriate medicinal chemistry textbook, such as “An introduction to medicinal chemistry by Graham L Patrick” and for pharmacology I would recommend “Rang and Dale’s Pharmacology”.
Secondly, some of the data, particularly in your pharmacokinetics section, appears to be from a reference with details METHYLprednisolone. This is not the correct drug – this represents a major issue in your draft.
Finally, I think that your pharmacodynamics/mode of action sections need revision. You have tried to combine too many concepts into these sections and as such, none are covered in sufficient detail or with clarity. Please focus on the action of prednisolone as a corticosteroid and its action on the glucocorticoid receptor.)
fix all the errors
this the essay
write a 1000 word report on this medicine This needs to include the following points -The chemical structure of the medicine with the functional groups identified -The mode of action of the medicine – i.e. the pharmacology surrounding its action – The pharmacodynamics (what the medicine does to the body) and the pharmacokinetics (what the body does to the medicine) of the medicine including how it is metabolised and excreted by the body, what the half life is etc. – How the medicine is used in practice, which patients are treated with it, what are its main 5 side effects, how do you counsel a patient about it, how do you decide on a dosage. – table about medicine interaction -diagram medicine harmfulness -references from books (easy to access online) use BNF/ articles PLEASE FOLLOW THE MARKING SCHEME THAT IVE ATTACHED
