That is my tutor`s recommenations and feedback.
Your plan is too broad. Your plan seems to be to analyse the implementation of the NPM in Africa. This is a contextual issue. You need to focus on a case of organisational change (that is a change within or to a public sector organisation). As we considered in Week 3 – the NPM is a contextual factor .Your argument should then relate to the reason for change outcomes (focusing on how the change was managed and how the implementation of change was shaped by contextual factors) – your recommendations will then focus on how to successfully manage change within public sector organisations – take a look at the guidance on the VLE.

Your analysis should:

Focus on a case of organisational change within a public sector context
Analyse the context, content, and process of the change.
Evaluate the change and discuss what contributed to its success or lack of success
Discuss what lessons can be learnt from this case study for achieving effective change within a public sector context.
Draw on the literature, theories and frameworks covered in the module, as appropriate and relevant to your case