Critically compare any rescue procedure in the UK with the rescue procedure of your chosen jurisdiction, making recommendations to improve either or both systems

The question ask for critical compare in these paper of my essay is my way in the writing correct and answer part of question ? Also, can you please check the information in the Voting and Moratorium sections because it is a new law on me I want to be sure my writing is correct. The main law in this essay are Insolvency Act 1986 and Insolvency rules 2016