Instructor Orders: (provide evaluation and feedback to the other student in the comment section. Now, the real key to getting all the points is to tell me why: why were some good and why did others need improvement? Specifically, what errors did they make and how can they be improved? )

More details of the instructions are in the uploaded file (instructions)
the other file has the other student essay
it is due before midnight tomorrow May 19 before midnight
11:59 pm