Intergrated Science and Mathematics Curriculum
Refer to the UK curriculum and school teaching within the UK.
Identify where maths is currently integrated into the science curriculum, and identify that students find this cross over challenging.
However, it is unclear from the assignment whether you are wanting to develop pedagogical tools to help students with this area of the curriculum, or identify how to bring in more elements of the mathematics curriculum into different topics within science.
You make some interesting points and some strong statements, but often these are left without evidence so it is not possible for the reader to tell if this is an informed opinion based on evidence, or just conjecture.
You should pay attention to providing references for the statements you make to add weight and legitimacy to your arguments.
Although you provided a rationale as to why this is an important area to focus on, you did not use this to draw firm conclusions on how this would influence your planning. Once you have identified an area for interrogation,
Explain the why and how you are going to incorporate this. The range of literature you used to discuss the maths and science integration is limited, and for this to be considered Master’s level, it is important to use more than 6 articles.