Why does abortion considered as a right of a woman right
“ This does not engage a rights framework. On the face of this it does not look like a women’s human rights essay and does not appear to have a rights framework.
You could fit this into a rights framework but as it stands you don’t explain why it is necessary to give an analysis of the history of abortion and the different positions in order to support women’s rights, or look at the framework for women’s rights which might include abortion.
It would be a good start to look at how the international human rights framework addressed and discussed abortion?
Comparative elements – Without clearer identification of periods of time and what links these situations its not clear what purpose this comparison serves.
There are other problems here. The essay does not engage with academic rights literature and many citations are missing.
