[Revision] Water Scarcity Refugees
1) The following comments still need to be addressed: “The customer clarified that secondary data is needed and it should be mostly quantitative, yet quantitative methods aren’t properly outlined.
2) The discussion has to be longer than the results.”- Restructure the results accordingly; quantitative and qualitative data should be outlined separated. Start the discussion afresh as it’s based on the wrong sources- all of them are introduced in the paper for the first time (this is the case for the works by Zhang, Xu and Kanyerere, 2020; Joel et al. (2016); Ajjur and Baalousha, 2021; Dillon and Arshad, 2016 etc.), while we specifically asked you to only compare the obtained results to the LR findings.
