What are the two opposing points on the issue? What is the thesis statement, and how well does it connect to the rest of the essay? What are three positives about this rough draft? What are three areas the student should focus on during revision?

Issue Analysis Rough Draft for Peer Review

Here is the link to the Issue Analysis Rough Draft for Peer Review:

https://swccd.instructure.com/courses/42246/assignments/644155

complete three peer reviews.

Read the essay and thoughtfully answer these questions. Answers need to be more than ‘yes’ or ‘no’, provide answers that can actually help improve the essay.

Outline the essay

Issue is focused on in this essay:

What are the two opposing points on the issue?

What is the thesis statement (copy and paste it here), and how well does it connect to the rest of the essay?

What are three positives about this rough draft?

What are three areas the student should focus on during revision?