Rights and Freedoms of Women within Marriage
The thesis statment should be in the form of: I would argue that women in Islam have “more, less, similar, different” rights and freedoms than women in Orthodox Judaism. You can insert more, less, similar, different in that spot depending on the research and this statement should be included in the introduction paragraph. The first sentence should state what the research paper will be discussing something like This paper will compare how the act of marriage affects the rights and freedoms of women in Islam and Orthodox Judaism religions?