How has the writer altered, or changed, the material from the Annotated Bibliography to the Six-Source Essay? What sources has she added to the ? What effect do the new source(s) have in the essay?

Six Source Essay

After reading the two articles and the information on transitions, answer the following questions:

(1) How has the writer altered, or changed, the material from the Annotated Bibliography to the Six-Source Essay? (Answer in 1-3 sentences.) (E.g., “The writer has developed a thesis…; The writer has synthesized sources…..;The writer has clarified connections…”)

(2) What sources has she added to the Six Source Essay? What effect do the new source(s) have in the essay? (1-3 sentences) (E.g., “The new sources serve to emphasize the writer’s point that…; The new sources illustrate specific ideas in the other articles…..”)

(3) Pick a paragraph section of the Six-Source Essay where synthesis needs to be improved, and add an appropriate transitional phrase/sentence