download the file and save on your hard drive by adding Peer Review. Take the time to read it through carefully; after the first read, consider what global feedback you’d like to offer the writer. Once you’ve read through a second time, you’ll get to work reviewing.

Peer essay review 1

To review your first essay, you must first download the file and save on your hard drive by adding Peer Review_Writer’sLastName_Rough). Take the time to read it through carefully; after the first read, consider what global feedback you’d like to offer the writer. Once you’ve read through a second time, you’ll get to work reviewing. Offer at least ten substantive comments within the body of the essay you are reviewing (for example, in Microsoft Word, you’d go to Insert> New Comment). You might use these questions to guide your comments:

1. If this was my paper, what would I change about the hook and why?
2. If this was my paper, would I make the claim clearer and why?
3. If this was my paper, would I provide any more definitions or context in the introduction, and why?
4. If this was my paper, would I revise any of my transitions in the body paragraph, and why?
5. If this was my paper, would I expand my conclusion and why?

At the end of the essay, draft a brief paragraph that highlights the strengths of the essay as well as the two areas of concern the author noted. Upload the reviewed document in response to the original post and move on to a second essay.