Personal Statement: Lehman College
Your essay lacks specifics and is almost identical in language and style to the sample shared in Blackboard unit one. That was not the intention of the sample. What is required is for you to share your personal statement, your story, your journey.
What is your specific career goal? How is your enrollment at Lehman College preparing you to achieve it? Who is your inspiration? Your mentor? What internships have you done? What did you learn from them? What jobs have you had? What did you learn from them? How are you balancing your schedule of work, attending classes and internships, if applicable? What challenges have you overcome? What are your next steps? Like all students in the class, you have the option of submitting a revised paper at the end of the semester to improve your grade.