The question of the paper is: To what extent does the empowerment of women impact the standard of living of the society in Rwanda, and is there a difference between Kigali city and Nyarugenge?
I am also sending you the draft, which is really confused and unorganized, therefore it should all be rewritten, but the table of contents is more or less how I would like the work to be structured. It is important that a lot of data for Kigali city and Nyarugenge is collected in tables, so that the analysis can be done well.
Also maps are important, so it would be great to add a couple in the work and add the sources and legend for each