Please revise these areas of the paper (1-3) and see comments from Professor in parentheses that need to be changed.
1.Explains a decision-making model
(Theory Z is not really a decision making model but is a management model. To reach a distinguished for this scoring guide area learners need to fully describe all the components of at least two decision making models, such as the rational decision making model and the intuitive decision making model and the compare and contrast the two models. You might also consider the OODA loop model or Klein’s recognition primed decision making model or the model from Vroom-Yetton-Jago.)
2. Describe a solution to an organizational communication problem using a decision-making model.
(The paper included a problem solution section but the problem solution section of this paper needs to include step-by-step use of the decision making model you chose. For example, if you chose to use the rational decision making model then the paper would clearly describe the activities you would suggest happen in each of the steps of the rational model.)
3. Justify how recommended solutions address a communication problem.
(The paper included comments related to justifications although comparisons between two possible decision making models would have been a good topic to include.)
