The essay has been provided by the lecturer ,the essay has to be re write.
The following essay has been submitted by a colleague of yours last year, at Birkbeck, for the same Management Studies I assignment. Please read it carefully and discuss it in terms of strengths and weaknesses. Start by summarising the main points/arguments that the essay is making; decide if the essay answers the essay question mentioned at the top of the page; and critically discuss the main points in light of the existing peer-reviewed literature on scientific management. Please also refer to how the essay is written in general, its structure, its presentation (i.e. grammar), referencing, and academic conventions more broadly. Finally, provide suggestions for how the essay could be improved.
Please make sure you:
refer to the peer-reviewed literature (notably journal articles)
stick to the word count (2,000)
check the marking criteria
reference your essay according to the Harvard referencing style
PLEASE RE WRITTE DE ESSAY AND FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS FROM MY LECTURER ,THE ESSAY HAS 2000 WORDS ,THE ONE PROVIDED BY HER HAS ONLY 1500 .
MANY THANKS FOR YOUR CONTINUED HELP
this essay has 70% of the total mark.
