Since this is a religion paper, there should be mention of deep ecology as a philosophy, but also how it has religious notions, and perhaps mention of sustainability attempts that are more religious/stem from indigenous or traditional groups.

Current sustainability attempts

The paper needs to be a review of how current sustainability attempts/projects (about 2 or 3) fit into the category of deep ecology; how they fit the standards of deep ecological thought or do not…It needs to base itself around the deep ecology philosophy, and evaluate different attempts at conservation and environmental projects through this lens. Since this is a religion paper, there should be mention of deep ecology as a philosophy, but also how it has religious notions, and perhaps mention of sustainability attempts that are more religious/stem from indigenous or traditional groups.