From the policing innovations discussed in this chapter, which do you think is the most appropriate to address local-level problems and which do you think is most appropriate in addressing transnational forms of wildlife crime? And why?

Policing innovations

From the policing innovations discussed in this chapter, which do you think is the most appropriate to address local-level problems and which do you think is most appropriate in addressing transnational forms of wildlife crime? And why?

 

How do the different “teachers” of Sinclair come together to support a singular message about growing up?

Demian by Herman hesse

How do the different “teachers” of Sinclair come together to support a singular message about growing up?

Explain what your TOPIC is in your own words and WHY you chose to research it for writing project 1. What kind of information related to your topic and spaces/places will you need for Project 1? Where did you locate this particular source?

Composition & Rhetoric

Description
Be sure you have completed and submitted the Thesis Statement and Outline Assignment before completing this one. That assignment had you create an outline with your plan to write your introduction, body, and conclusion paragraphs for your Space/Place Analysis.

Assignment Resources:
• Space Place Analysis Assignment Sheet.pdf 0 Remember, for this project you are analyzing the connections between your chosen topic (Identity, Access, Culture, Diversity, Inclusion, or Community) and the spaces/places you occupy.

Assignment Instructions:
1. Using Methodist’s Davis Memorial Library website, find one source you can use in your Writing Project #1 to provide support for your topic. This source can be a book, article, periodical, video, etc. The Using Library Resources webpage will help you find sources.

2. In a Word document, start with your APA-style title page for this assignment. Include your title, name, course name, instructor name, and date. (See the Research and APA Style Powerpoint slide 18).

3. Read/view your library source, take any notes, then answer the following questions on the second page of your document:

  • • Explain what your TOPIC is in your own words and WHY you chose to research it for writing project 1.
  • • What kind of information related to your topic and spaces/places will you need for Project 1?
  • • Where did you locate this particular source?
  • • How do you know this source is credible and appropriate to use for your paper?

4. Refer to your Thesis Statement and Outline Assignment and choose one of your main topics in which you can incorporate your source. Next, you will write ONE BODY PARAGRAPH from your space/place analysis (due M 11/7). (You are not writing the entire essay, just one paragraph.)
– Your paragraph must use textual evidence or information from the library SOURCE. In your paragraph, you must provide 2 DIRECT QUOTES from the source. (Remember the ICE Method when using quotations. – Introduce, “insert quote”, Cite, & Explain. (See Applying Information From Sources for more information on using sources.)
– Remember, overall, each body paragraph of your final paper should discuss 1 MAIN POINT related to your topic (Identity, Access, Culture, Diversity, Inclusion, or Community). As in my example 1, my topic is DIVERSITY and my 3 main points are virtual spaces, physical artifacts, and personal interactions. When writing my body paragraph, I should only talk about one of those main points. When writing the rest of my essay, I will create separate paragraphs for the other 2 main points.

5. After typing your body paragraph, create your APA Reference page. On this page, list the correct APA entry for your library source. (See the Research and APA Style 7th Edition Powerpoint, slides 21, 33 for more information.) Other Requirements: • Your submitted Word document must be in APA format to include font style, font size, margins, page numbers, etc. Refer to Research Powerpoint.

What have you learned about the information and sources available on your primary sources and topic? What types of searches, search terms, and search strategies were the most successful and which were the least successful?

Research Report 2

Primary

2. Hysteria

Secondary

Foucault Madness and Civilization
https://monoskop.org/images/1/14/Foucault_Michel_Madness_and_Civilization_A_History_of_Insanity_in_the_Age_of_Reason.pdf

Find 3 scholarly sources that you could potentially use in essay 2. At least 2 of your sources should come from different disciplines (such as history, literature, gender studies, medicine, human sexuality, media studies, etc).

List the primary sources (Darwin, Turner, ”The Yellow Wallpaper”, Herland, Weir Mitchell, Hysteria, etc) you plan to use.
Name the secondary source(s) (Sharp, Foucault, etc) you plan to use from class.
Find 3 scholarly sources of your own. (You are also welcome to use more than three, such as At least 2 of them should come from different disciplines (anthropology, literary studies, sociology, medicine, human sexuality, film and television studies, or history). Look for sources relevant to your topic (Progress/ Science and Medicine/ Gender/ Power/ Sexuality) and your primary sources. Other key terms like “hysteria”, “madness”, “women’s literature”, “nervous conditions”, or “neurasthenia” may help you to narrow your searches. This could include sources that you used in essay 1, if they’re still relevant or helpful, but please choose one of your new sources for the overview.
Informational Overview. Pick one of your scholarly sources to read and provide the following:

Summary of the thesis.
Paraphrase 1. Give a paraphrase of an important piece of information—historical 
fact, biographical detail, or theoretical approach, etc.—that relates to your primary 
source and/or topic.
Paraphrase 2. Briefly paraphrase another important piece of information— 
historical fact, biographical detail, or theoretical approach, etc.—that relates to your 
primary source and/or topic.. 
 Writing up your Research Report. Your report should have the following sections, clearly labeled like in the example provided in this week's module.

Primary Sources and Topic. In this section you must explain your topic (in your own words) and discuss how you will develop your argument for Paper 1. You should be sure to keep focus on the primary sources you will write about and how you see them taking a position in relation to your topic. This section must be a minimum of 100 words long.
Search terms: The research report you turn in should have a list of search terms you generated to help you find scholarship appropriate for your paper. Drawing on the readings from class and your topic, write down all search terms you think might be helpful for finding scholarly sources on Darwin’s work. You should continue to build on your lists of search terms based on what you discover in the research process (such as Library of Congress terms).
Scholarly article or book #1 (see * below).
Scholarly article or book #2 (see * below).
Scholarly source ”chased”; (see * below). *For each of the three scholarly sources you find, you need include the following information in this order. Be sure to label each of these sections in the log:
MLA Citation. Give the full MLA citation for your scholarly source.
Give the discipline relevant for the scholarly source.
Passage ”chased.” If you found the scholarly source by ”chasing” a citation (#5 above), then type out the passage that you chased.
Database searched. List the name of the database you searched to find the scholarly source (e.g., JSTOR, Academic Search Premier, CSULA Library Catalog, WorldCat, etc.).
Type of search. List the type of search you used to find the scholarly source (e.g., keyword, author, subject, etc.).
Search term(s) used. List the search term(s) you used when you found the scholarly source.
Write an evaluation (of approximately 50 words) analyzing how this scholarly source seems appropriate for your final paper based on the information you find in the library database. You could discuss how the title seems to relate to your 
topic, how the discipline seems to relate to your primary source, and how it may fill a gap or contribute something unique to your research.
Informational Overview. Pick one of your scholarly sources to read and give an information overview. The overview should have the following elements:

Summary of the thesis (50 word minimum).
Paraphrase 1. Give a paraphrase of an important piece of information—historical fact, biographical detail, or theoretical approach, etc.—that relates to your primary source and/or topic (2-4 sentences).
Paraphrase 2. Give a paraphrase of another important piece of information— historical fact, biographical detail, or theoretical approach, etc.—that relates to your primary source and/or topic (2-4 sentences).
Research report evaluation. This section must be a minimum of 150 words. In this section you must discuss the research process so far. You should answer questions like the following in the course of your discussion:

What have you learned about the information and sources available on your primary sources and topic?
What types of searches, search terms, and search strategies were the most successful and which were the least successful?
How much scholarship does there seem to be on your primary sources and topic?
What other issues or sources come up a lot in your searches?

Write a critical analysis essay in relation to David Zinczenko’s “Don’t blame the eater; the connection between fast food and obese kids” (below).

Critical analysis of Don’t blame the eater; the connection between fast food and obese kids

For this assignment, you are to write a critical analysis essay in relation to David Zinczenko’s “Don’t blame the eater; the connection between fast food and obese kids” (below).  Read the article carefully.  Once you have read and understood it, please write a critical analysis that evaluates the success of the article’s argument. Your essay should have an introduction that sets out your thesis (one that indicates whether the argument is successful), supporting paragraphs that begin with topic sentences and that develop your thesis, and a conclusion.  Be sure that your writing is carefully organized, clear and coherent, and free from mechanical error.  This essay is worth 20% of your final grade.

Don’t blame the eater; the connection between fast food and obese kids

Zinczenko, David. The New York Times 152 (23 November 2002): A3

If ever there were a newspaper headline custom-made for Jay Leno’s monologue, this was it. Kids taking on McDonald’s this week, suing the company for making them fat. Isn’t that like middle-aged men suing Porsche for making them get speeding tickets? Whatever happened to personal responsibility? (1)

I tend to sympathize with these portly fast-food patrons, though. Maybe that’s because I used to be one of them. (2)

I grew up as a typical mid-1980’s latchkey kid. My parents were split up, my dad off trying to rebuild his life, my mom working long hours to make the monthly bills. Lunch and dinner, for me, was a daily choice between McDonald’s, Taco Bell, Kentucky Fried Chicken or Pizza Hut. Then as now, these were the only available options for an American kid to get an affordable meal. By age 15, I had packed 212 pounds of torpid teenage tallow on my once lanky 5-foot-10 frame. (3)

Then I got lucky. I went to college, joined the Navy Reserves and got involved with a health magazine. I learned how to manage my diet. But most of the teenagers who live, as I once did, on a fast-food diet won’t turn their lives around: They’ve crossed under the golden arches to a likely fate of lifetime obesity. And the problem isn’t just theirs — it’s all of ours. (4)

Before 1994, diabetes in children was generally caused by a genetic disorder — only about 5 percent of childhood cases were obesity-related, or Type 2, diabetes. Today, according to the National Institutes of Health, Type 2 diabetes accounts for at least 30 percent of all new childhood cases of diabetes in this country. (5)

Not surprisingly, money spent to treat diabetes has skyrocketed, too. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention estimate that diabetes accounted for $2.6 billion in health care costs in 1969. Today’s number is an unbelievable $100 billion a year. (6)

Shouldn’t we know better than to eat two meals a day in fast-food restaurants? That’s one argument. But where, exactly, are consumers — particularly teenagers — supposed to find alternatives? Drive down any thoroughfare in America, and I guarantee you’ll see one of our country’s more than 13,000 McDonald’s restaurants. Now, drive back up the block and try to find someplace to buy a grapefruit. (7)

Complicating the lack of alternatives is the lack of information about what, exactly, we’re consuming. There are no calorie information charts on fast-food packaging, the way there are on grocery items. Advertisements don’t carry warning labels the way tobacco ads do. Prepared foods aren’t covered under Food and Drug Administration labeling laws. Some fast-food purveyors will provide calorie information on request, but even that can be hard to understand. (8)

For example, one company’s Web site lists its chicken salad as containing 150 calories; the almonds and noodles that come with it (an additional 190 calories) are listed separately. Add a serving of the 280-calorie dressing, and you’ve got a healthy lunch alternative that comes in at 620 calories. But that’s not all. Read the small print on the back of the dressing packet and you’ll realize it actually contains 2.5 servings. If you pour what you’ve been served, you’re suddenly up around 1,040 calories, which is half of the government’s recommended daily calorie intake. And that doesn’t take into account that 450-calorie super-size Coke. (9)

Make fun if you will of these kids launching lawsuits against the fast-food industry, but don’t be surprised if you’re the next plaintiff. As with the tobacco industry, it may be only a matter of time before state governments begin to see a direct line between the $1 billion that McDonald’s and Burger King spend each year on advertising and their own swelling health care costs. (10)

And I’d say the industry is vulnerable. Fast-food companies are marketing to children a product with proven health hazards and no warning labels. They would do well to protect themselves, and their customers, by providing the nutrition information people need to make informed choices about their products. Without such warnings, we’ll see more sick, obese children and more angry, litigious parents. I say, let the deep-fried chips fall where they may. (11)

 

 

To include the entire passage from “Five Ways to Boost Your Will Power” in your own essay, what should you do according to MLA style?

Self checkworking with sources

1. Which of the following direct quotations is punctuated correctly?
A. My friend asked “when you go to the store can you pick up some coffee?”

B. My friend asked me to pick up some coffee when I go to the store.

C. “When you go to the store, can you pick up coffee” asked my friend.

D. “When you go to the store,” my friend said, “can you please pick up some coffee?”

2. Kotz, Deborah. “Five Ways to Boost Your Will Power.” The Boston Globe. 7 Nov. 2011.
https://www.bostonglobe.com/lifestyle/healthwellness/2011/11/07/fivewaysboostwillpower/fpgy7Lo599ofDi2IsbsewK/story.html

A. to describe how you feel about the article

B. to rewrite the original article

C. to use the writer’s exact words

D. to give an accurate and brief overview of the article, without any personal opinions

3. Bryson, Bill. “Walking Around Sydney.” In a Sunburned Country. Broadway Books, 2000, pp. 6163.
A.Remove the author’s name from either the signal phrase or parenthetical citation.

B.. Add a signal phrase.

C..Add an intext or parenthetical citation.

D. Correct the punctuation.

4.To include the entire passage from “Five Ways to Boost Your Will Power” in your own essay, what should you do according to MLA style?

Some tips for boosting willpower include:
Do something physically challenging. Adopt a new habit, such as brushing your teeth with the opposite hand or adjusting your posture every 30 minutes, both of which have been validated in research. Or learn a new skill like rollerblading, Zumba, or ballroom dance. Exercise every day, preferably outdoors. A 2010 review of 10 studies found that the biggest moodboosting, stressreducing effects of exercise came from fiveminute doses. Getting active outside provided an added bonus of increased willpower in some studies, she said, possibly because being around nature reduced stress more than being indoors.

Kotz, Deborah. “Five Ways to Boost Your Will Power.” The Boston Globe. 7 Nov. 2011. https://www.bostonglobe.com/lifestyle/healthwellness/2011/11/07/fivewaysboostwillpower/fpgy7Lo599ofDi2IsbsewK/story.html.

a. Use quotation marks because you are borrowing exact words

b. Use block quotation because the passage exceeds 4 lines.
c. Use indirect citation since Kotz is citing the expertise of others.

d. Use a footnote to provide an explanatory note about this Kotz’s expertise.

5.Which of the following direct quotations is correctly punctuated?
A “Planning ahead is the best way to succeed in this course,” stated my professor.

B. “Planning ahead” said my professor, “is the best way to succeed in this course.

C. My professor said that “staying ahead will help me succeed.”

d.My professor told me that I need to plan ahead to do well in class.

6. In the following sentence, which words are part of the signal phrase, telling readers that quoted materials are coming?
Her article quoted a recent Massachusetts General Hospital study that found “those who engage in formal meditation for 15 minutes a day actually add gray matter to their brain’s prefrontal cortex” (Kotz, 13).

A.Her article quoted

b. that found

C.brain’s prefrontal cortex

D.those who engage

7. Which of the following quotations is correctly punctuated?
Seattle. “Address.” Jan. 1854. Speech.

A.In his response to Governor Isaac Stevens, Chief Seattle said, “[L]et us hope that the hostilities between us may never return. We would have everything to lose and nothing to gain.”

B.The sentiment “[L]et us hope that the hostilities between us may never return. We would have everything to lose and nothing to gain,” (Seattle) is one we should all support.

c.In his response to Governor Isaac Stevens, Chief Seattle said “[L]et us hope that the hostilities between us may never return. We would have everything to lose and nothing to gain.”

What if you found out the children you are “helping” are actually being kept in poor conditions so voluntourists will spend money to come to the local area? Dale Rolfe, a supporter of ethical voluntourism, explains the shocking reality that “Animal sanctuaries and orphanages are often manufactured for the voluntourist…encouraging a cycle of exploiting the very animals and children the volunteers are trying to help.”

Voluntourism: An Opportunity Too Good to be True

Read the speech “Voluntourism: An Opportunity Too Good to be True” and consider the advertisement “The Opportunity of a Lifetime.” Then, answer the question.

 

A Speech to the Student Body of Evergreen High

[1] Picture this: It’s Spring Break, and you fly off to some country where there’s lush rainforests and beautiful, blue coastlines to explore. There’s also people in need, so you decide to blend your vacation with volunteering. Volunteering as a tourist, or voluntourism, seems like a great way to explore new regions and help people at the same time. However, this “volunteer plus travel” experience can actually harm local communities. While many teens might view traveling and volunteering abroad as a worthwhile adventure, there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference.

 

[2] Most would agree that volunteering in general is a worthy use of time. However, what if you found out the children you are “helping” are actually being kept in poor conditions so voluntourists will spend money to come to the local area? Dale Rolfe, a supporter of ethical voluntourism, explains the shocking reality that “Animal sanctuaries and orphanages are often manufactured for the voluntourist…encouraging a cycle of exploiting the very animals and children the volunteers are trying to help.”

 

[3] Proponents of the “volunteer plus travel” experience also argue that traveling to new places builds character and is a valuable way to learn about different cultures. With voluntourism, however, participants often pursue experiences that are all about them. For example, they sign up to build a school for a gold star on their resume, but they have no real building skills and take jobs away from local construction workers (Schulten). Or, they arrive to teach English but instead take selfies with the locals. One world traveler and ethical voluntourist believes voluntourism “can perpetuate small minded views of the world by taking insulated, fake, and structured experiences and selling them as unabridged and eye opening” (Carlos). The voluntour experience is a mirage. The voluntourist’s eyes are not opened to real life at the destination, and lasting change is not achieved.

 

[4] If you want a genuine experience where you can see a lasting impact, there are better options than voluntourism. You can volunteer in your local community. Give an hour every week to your town’s animal rescue. Serve monthly dinners to the homeless. Be a reliable, positive influence on a child who needs a mentor. Studies show that volunteering and forming lasting relationships with those you help has a positive impact on your physical and emotional health. In fact, blood pressure is reduced, memory is improved, and rates of depression are reduced (Michaels).

 

[5] There is another reason to look into alternatives to voluntourism. Did you know the average “voluntour” travel package costs $3,400 (Rolfe)? Could that travel money be better spent? If the world’s citizens are your passion, it could go to an international organization. If you care about education, your funds can be used to buy books for students in faraway lands. If you want villagers to have clean water, contribute funds to local efforts to dig wells. If you want to experience a different culture, travel to the country as a guest, and learn from the locals how you can best help them after you’ve returned home. But do not voluntour.

 

[6] In reality, there are better ways to make a difference. Voluntourism might appear to be an adventure that blends travel and helping others, but it does little except provide a costly, superficial experience that might actually do more harm than good. So, volunteer where you are most needed-at home, where you can stay to see the job through and form genuine, lasting relationships. Choose a beautiful coastline closer to home and send the travel money you saved to an international organization that will put it to good use. Whatever you do, don’t turn someone else’s hardship into your vacation.

 

“The Opportunity of a Lifetime”

Both texts (the speech and the advertisement) address voluntourism. However, each text has a different purpose, which is reflected by the details each writer chose to include. Consider the words and images used.

 

Do you see this study as an accurate picture of the American Dream’s impact on minorities in America? Why?

Week 5 Discussion

Read: Armstrong, Joslyn, et al. “‘A Dream Deferred’: How Discrimination Impacts the American Dream Achievement for African Americans.” Journal of Black Studies, vol. 50, no. 3, Apr. 2019, pp. 227-250. Academic Search Complete. doi:10.1177/0021934719833330.

In reading Joslyn Armstrong et al’s “A Dream Deferred,” some guidance will be helpful. To wade through the research is daunting, so do not read the whole of the document. Read the following sections only to be able to answer the discussion questions:

  • Abstract pp. 227-228 2.
  • Introduction pp. 228-229 3.
  • Conclusion pp. 246-247

These sections will enable you to consider the study’s purpose and its conclusions in order to answer question 1 of this week’s discussion.

1. Do you see this study as an accurate picture of the American Dream’s impact (or lack of it) on minorities in America? Why?

2. What do you propose is the leading issue holding people back from achieving the American Dream? Why?

3. Can you see any way forward that is equitable on all fronts/issues hindering Americans from achieving the American Dream? Describe your plan in detail.

Write a paragraph discussing the images, repeated words, and general theme of Leonard Cohen’s poem “Everybody Knows”.

Exercise 6

Write a paragraph discussing the images, repeated words, and general theme of Leonard Cohen’s poem “Everybody Knows”. The analysis should explain how this work speaks to you while focusing on specific lines and images in the poem, especially those repeated.

What thoughts do you have about the governess and her behavior? Is she heroic or villainous in the novel “The Turn of the Screw?”

Exercise 4

What thoughts do you have about the governess and her behavior? Is she heroic or villainous in the novel “The Turn of the Screw?”